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About Deviant Member HardcoreHunterMale/Unknown Group :iconshoulderloliclub: #ShoulderLoliClub
I never had a shoulder loli!
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:icondjhermo:
~DJHermo May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm sorry
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:iconzoroark-trainer:
don't apologize for nothing
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:iconhardcorehunter:
You didn't do anything man no need to be sorry. Your friend just needs to calm down.
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:icondjhermo:
~DJHermo May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
she's not my friend, she is just omone that comes by after her sister died in november of 2012
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:iconhardcorehunter:
So why do you keep apologizing for her?
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:iconjbhermo2:
~jbhermo2 May 13, 2013  Student Artist
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Can you please check this out, he's my big brother.
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:iconhardcorehunter:
I think the weight should be a bit higher if you want the character to have more muscle. Maybe explain a little on who the master is. They were born at the beginning of time then when was his master born to know so much more than them. Is his master god or something??? I am wondering is this creation a god himself? He seems to have the power to create other life. I think this looks more like an outline. There are some places that could be elaborated on and some words that could be replaced with better words. I think there needs to be more detail in the transition of time. We go from the beginning of time to him meeting Tia Halibel. Also I think there needs to be something more to have happened for this character to have fallen in love with her. This is a character that has been around since the start of time and has seen everything, and can create life with a whim. What makes her so special to gain his notice let alone attraction. In Greek stories it was common for gods who have been around forever to be attracted and copulate with mortals, but for something like love it would usually be some kind of act that impressed them. Usually the god themselves is testing the mortal and when the mortal goes against what the god thought they would do it impresses them so much that they fall in love. I think it would take something like this to happen for a character of this origin to fall head over heals in love.
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:icondjhermo:
~DJHermo May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
actually that is my sixth proto-type of which I left the flaws because I want people to NOT want to steal him, I have the finalize version with all the flaws gone and no longer connected to the Manga "Bleach". I do enjoy the feed back. SO I say thank you.
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:iconzoroark-trainer:
my aqaintence told me to send that to you because he wished to see your opinion of that OC
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